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Julian Macfarlane's avatar

I liked this. A LOT! Creative, interesting and go your points across in an interesting way. Keep on writing lyrics. And poetry.

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The Revolution Continues's avatar

Thank you for your kind words. I very seldom write any poetry anymore. I won one poetry contest as a child--a whole $5 first prize--but I've never had any luck since then. But every once and a while I get the urge to do something different...

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Toma's avatar

Keep writing!

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The Revolution Continues's avatar

But not song lyrics or poetry, right? LOL!!

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Toma's avatar

Sorry for the miscommunication!

Not at all what I meant. I was trying to outrace my battery going dead. Lol

I've got a comment on one of your other essays you may not like but I'll send it off anyways.

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